Here is the B/W version of the dramtic scene in my second fanfic of COTT.

"Neil, you've got to listen to me!" Jay sniffles back the tears and tries to regain his composure. "You can't give up! You're not a quitter, are you Neil?" Slowly Neil shakes his head. "No," he replies in a weak, barely audible whisper.

Archie catches up to Herry's side and peers over at their injured friend. "Is Neil still breathing?" Herry looks down. For one horrified moment he thought Neil had truly stopped breathing, until he notices his friend's chest moving - but only just. "Barely," Herry says tersely to the young punk. Atlanta overhears him. She comes up around behind Herry and puts her hand on Neil's shoulder. "Hang on, ok Neil. Chiron will fix you up...he has to!" She says in a shaky voice. Again Neil, barely conscious, responds with a whimper to let her know he has heard and acknowledged her.

From "Teammate Down" chapter 3 "The Longest Ride"

From "Teammate Down" chapter 3 "The Longest Ride"